November 7, 2019

Our critical peer-revision (response) for Tsoirot

In our opinion, @sausagewiththeketcup used very interesting facts, ideas. I liked, that he offer some life hacks, I think people who wants go to the Denmark, will read this article curiosity.

Yes, apparently that, he used linking words. He used a very good construction. Supposedly, he will not bad journalist in future, if he want. He used this linking words:

  • Nowadays
  • Also
  • First of all
  • Because
  • However
  • Consequently
  • As outlined above