W2 IELTS

Individuals often argue about the problem of improving public health. The majority of people think that increasing the number of sports faculties may solve it, however, others desagree with them and belive that another measures are needed. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my oun opinion.

The first thing that needs to be said is that a lt of sport facilities can be made and replaced by government aroud the cities. Thus, people will be able to visit them for free and improve their healt. I think that it may be really useful tactic because many individuals do not have extra money for going to gym. Moreover sport equipment will always be in sight and remaind peopke about doing sport. On the onter hand, there are a big number of people who do not agree with such view. For instance, they say that the best way to improve health is to avoid bad habits. Furthermore, they convinced that people should not waste their limited time on sport because it is not effective.

Personally, I hold the view that individuals should not follow only one way of improving health because public health cannot be improved by doing only one thing. There are three things that healthy peoole should follow. Firstly, people have to eat health food like vegetables, fruits, meat and fish. Secondly, they should avoid bad habits sach as drinking alcohol, smoking and using drugs. Finaly, individuals ought to be physically active and, of course, try to not be in stressful situations. Therefore, public health will be improved.

To draw the conclusion, I can say that the increasing number of sport facilities will not impove public health greatly. Because people also need to follow other ways of improving their health such as eating healthy and avoiding harmful habits.