September 9, 2020

FRANCO. Notes. 8th September.

Hi Franco, very accurate improvements. We're 1 step away from rendering.

This scene needs to be improved for sure. Take a look the way the camera comes out from the lens. The movement looks like in slow mo. So in the tunnel the speed increases and then once it comes out from the middle of the lens, the movement becomes smooth with a gentle turn. I attached a separate scene in telegram.

After that I'd like to ask to save all of the scenes that we currently have in the condition that they are in a separate folder.

As an experiment I'd like you to try the following:

a) can we try to replace grey color with something else? for instance dark metallic or another option from your vision that will make the colors look "more expensive"? The beginning in terms of colors looks fire and very stylish. When it comes to grey, it's ok but I'd like to see what else can be done and if eventually it doesn't work we'll keep it the way it was.

b) if it's not a big deal a I'd also try to increase the overall contrast like 10% more and check the white balance. You can give it a try with a few scenes and send it to me to check.

c) this tiny thing can come out later

when the camera right here (pic bellow), so we see the way it comes out.

That's it and thank you for your hard work.