if learn English, might make s☺me pranks ))

It is one from my translations myself's rhymes (written under the pseudonym "White Knight" ☺)
If you found any mistake in the text, please, help me to correct it. I'm only learning...

It is dawning...You are softly smiling at your sleep.Rays of dawn got enmeshed in your eyelashes.Solar needles quick knit a shining iris,that is daybreak's train for Spring's peep...Melting snows rustle and slowly weepwhen they're slipping down on the tiling.And blank pages resign to silence's virus,which sinks any mind in quiet deeps...Souls and bodies grow in magic stationfrom abovewithin a sunlight's breadth.Some light touch of your somnolent breathis more belovedthan lot of declarations...