Day 24 — Email Workshop (Email 3)

Phase III · Mock & Mastery · Writing · Day 24 of 30 · ⏱ ~1.5 hours

📍 You are here: Day 23 · Speaking workshop → Day 24 · Email workshop → Day 25 · Discussion workshop

Take the email feedback from Mock 1 and your earlier submissions, fix the pattern, and prove it on a fresh prompt under time.

🎯 Today's goal: Eliminate your recurring email weakness (register, a missing bullet, or spelling) and write a clean Email 3.

✅ You're done when: you've submitted Email 3 with your one fix visibly applied.

⏰ Step 1 — Warm-Up: Register Match

Match the recipient to the right greeting and tone — the fastest email points to win or lose.

👉 Open the Warm-Up Exercise
4 items · auto-graded.

🔧 Step 2 — Workshop your pattern

Re-read that part of the Email Master Guide (PDF) and the Band 6 Email Sample Video.

🟢 Band 4→5 Nail all 3 bullets + a formal greeting/close, every time.
🔵 Band 5→6 Add idiomatic collocations and the positive-negative-positive "sandwich" for complaints.

⭐ Today's Individual Task — Write an Email

Strict 7 minutes · 100–150 words

You recently took an online course about digital marketing, but some of the video materials did not load properly. You want to contact the course coordinator, Dr. Lin, to report these issues and ask for guidance.

To: Dr. Lin · Subject: Issues with online course materials

In your email, do the following:

Describe the technical problems you experienced.
Explain how these problems affected your learning.
Ask how you can complete this part of the course.

📤 Submit for Hasmik's feedback: post your email in the "Tasks for Review and Feedback" section on Telegram and indicate which day's task it is.

💡 Pro Tips

One fix, made visible. Tell Hasmik what you changed — it makes feedback twice as useful.
Register is free points. "Dear Dr. Lin," + "Would it be possible…" + "Best regards," costs nothing and lifts your band.
Specifics = elaboration. Name the exact failure ("videos in Unit 3 froze at 2 minutes").
60-second polish with the Spelling & Error Checklist.

🔧 Materials for today

🔗 Connector & Phrase Bank
🛑 Spelling & Error Checklist

📁 Portfolio Entry — log Day 24

📅 Date · ✅ Steps completed (Y/N) · ⏱️ Time spent
📊 Warm-up score: ___ / 4
🎯 Email 3 submitted? (Y/N) · the one fix I applied: ___
🎯 Confidence today (1.0–6.0) · 🏆 One Win + 🤔 One Challenge

📞 Your 2 one-on-one meetings with Hasmik are included — book them if you haven't yet.

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