This is my first submission to Literotica! I welcome and encourage feedback of all kinds to improve my writing. Thank you to shittylifelessons for all of your back and forth with me, helping me edit and polish this piece. All Bottled Up Nicole kicked her shoes off and sat down on Jackson's lap, placing one knee on either side of his thighs and smiled at him. He laid his head back on the back of the couch and smiled back at her, placing his hands on top of her thighs. "My God, you're beautiful," he muttered, staring at her big, brown eyes. She grinned wider at him, her cheeks blushing. "Thanks for taking me out to dinner." "You're welcome," she replied. "You have any other birthday surprises up your sleeve?" he asked with a yawn. She...